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Wednesday 11 June 2014

Les Sylphides - Louis MacNeice




Life in a day: he took his girl to the ballet;
Being shortsighted himself could hardly see it –
    The white skirts in the grey
    Glade and the swell of the music
    Lifting the white sails.

Calyx upon calyx, Canterbury bells in the breeze
The flowers on the left mirrored to the flowers on the right
     And the naked arms above
     The powdered faces moving
     Like seaweed in a pool.

Now, he thought, we are floating – ageless, oarless –
 Now there is no separation, from now on
       You will be wearing white
       Satin and a red sash
       Under the waltzing trees.

But the music stopped, the dancers took their curtain,
The river had come to a lock – a shuffle of programmes –
        And we cannot continue down
        Stream unless we are ready
        To enter the lock and drop.

So they were married – to be the more together –
And found that they were never again so much together,
         Divided by the morning tea,
         By the evening paper,
         The children and the tradesmen’s bills.

Waking at times in the night she found assurance
Due to his regular breathing but wondered whether
         It was really worth it and where
         The river had flowed away
         And where were the white flowers.

6 comments:

  1. This poem has a irregular rhyming scheme , possibly to established the act of being unsure throughout a relationship. The poem uses a repetitive metaphor of 'calyx' which means flower bud , the poet may of used this term repetitively to show how much they cannot truly represent their feeling and love for them at the start , so much so that it overwhelms them.

    Not knowing which way the relationship will turn after you get over the show , the perfection flawless imagery of the ballet with the graceful slow movements. Every day seeming gentle and perfect with the other person there creating a continuous metaphor for the starting of a relationship ; Then suddenly, the 'music stopped'.

    The atmosphere is stern and adjusts to quiet ; whether they want to continue or not , then the poet uses the metaphor of 'lock and drop' which links to how canals get up and down streams , this also portrays how their relationship will never be the same after marriage as they are on a different stream and are locked into marriage.

    Lastly the sad ending of being divided by marriage over different interest of 'morning tea' and 'evening paper' but still locked in to family life. Never ending.

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    1. The narrator represents the poem bluntly , positive at the start , negative towards the end but over all telling a story ; it is an honest portrait of marriage and a relationship starting and ending . The poem makes me feel like you don't want to get married , because you want the happy times without the boring or sad times. However love contains both not one or the other. As without both you are not in love , and perhaps love is therefore acceptance in this poem. Therefore the poem is establishing acceptance towards both sides of a person .

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  2. The first three stanzas of this poem are very much the author saying that even though he is near sighted he will go to see this ballet because she wants to, which seems like he would do anything for her, as well as this in the third stanza he writes "there will be no separation" which give the image that he wants to spend his life with her and not leave her side and throughout this stanza he is giving images of a wedding such as talking about what she will be wearing, throughout these three stanzas he compares their love to a ballet where in everything is perfect which is most like the start of a new relationship where it is difficult to do wrong. However the last three stanzas show a contrasting view of their relationship, these stanzas are most likely used to show that later years of their relationship, throughout this part of the poem the repetitive metaphor is used where the writer keeps referring to a canal because in a canal there is no way to go back, which he uses as a metaphor for love

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  3. MacNeice conveys the deterioration of the love which he once shared with his wife by the use of deep, meaningful metaphors "The river had come to a lock" which conveys that he felt as though he and his girlfriend could not take their relationship any further unless marriage was in the question. "The river had flowed away" implies that the love which they felt for one another was no longer present, the water supply to the river had been cut off, much like the gates of a lock would do, and their love was no more.

    The somewhat absent rhyming structure could be foreshadowing the missing puzzle piece that is preventing the couple from being complete after a time that is suppose to bring the pair closer together and complete their love.

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  4. This poem written by Mac Neice is simular to the poem 'Talking in bed' by Larkin as they both use a depressive tone when refering to their love. Neice portrays the beginning of their love through the flawlessness of ballet as it is shown both in illustrating the imagery of the ballet, by the scene set in the second phrase of the first line, `He took his girl to the ballet`, and from then, a series of beautiful and romantic images are created of the show to show how happy and joyful their relationship was.The white and girlish clothes symbolize the purity and innocence of the relationship and the lovers. However, the end of the romance begins in the phrase, `But the music stopped` and this is followed through later with, `And so they were married`. Real life is seen to enter in the last three stanzas, and here MacNeice abandons the romantic love felt at the beginning, showing instead the drudgery of domestic life. The tone changes to more pensive reflecting on deep thoughts and wistful. The use of the interval in these stanzas: `-a shuffle of programmes - ` and `- to be the more together -`, marks a change from the flowing, even line rhythm earlier in the poem.

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  5. within this poem, the use of a metaphor to explain more in depth the meaningfulness of marrige between two people. with "lock" being described as the marrige, as when they are watching the ballet, they have come to a "lock" when the show has ended, by comparing this to a relationship with another. - this is comparing that they cannot continue their realtionship without entering the lock within the river, being marrige in a realtionship. also, macneiece shows that once they are married, they seem to not spend as much time toegther as they would before they are married. - overall, this poem is showing that within the relationship, they hit a certain part, where they couldnt progress anymore without being married.
    this could be compared to the poem by philip larkin, 'talking in bed' as time goes on after being married people have the tendency to see less of their loved ones, whereas before they seemed to have more 'fun'.

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